The graph below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread
in one European country from 2001 to 2006.
The line graph shows changes in the price of 800 grams of four different types of bread in a
country in Europe between 2001 and 2005.
Overall, while the price of wholegrain bread fluctuated wildly, there were increases of varying
degrees in that of the other three types. It is also clear that with the most noticeable growth in
price, brown bread, replacing wholegrain bread, became the most expensive type of bread in
2005.
In 2001, 800 grams of wholegrain bread cost 0.8 Euros, which was 0.2 Euros more expensive
than the other three types. The price of wholegrain bread then jumped to peak of 1.8 Euros in
2002, with a subsequent dramatic drop to 1 and 0.7 Euros in 2003 and 2004 respectively,
followed by a slight rise to the initial price of 0.8 Euros in 2005.
It is of note that the price of brown, white and rye bread was exactly the same in the first
surveyed year. While white bread cost significantly more in the following years, with the price
amounting to 1.3 Euros for 800 grams in 2005, that of rye bread was relatively stable between
0.5 and 0.7 Euros for the same weight. After almost tripling from 0.6 to 1.6 Euros from 2001 to
2003, the price of brown bread was erratic, hovering between 1.4 and 1.6 Euros till the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 40, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... 0.5 and 0.7 Euros for the same weight. After almost tripling from 0.6 to 1.6 Euros f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6288209607 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24198280749 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489082969432 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.9210157686 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.5 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387603997786 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190188588526 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112960400565 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144204406747 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101491400896 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.9 61.2550243902 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.17 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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