It is dangerous to trust only intelligence

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It is dangerous to trust only intelligence.

Humanity revolves around intelligence.A person who is wise has always been the centre of attention throughout the evolution of mankind. Prizes like Nobel are live examples how much intelligence is valued. But an intelligent person can cleverly take a whole nation astray. So, I think it is conspicuous that trusting only intelligence can be harmful.

Although, it is a by born human nature to trust intelligence, starting form the very beginning of humanity, not always intelligence has been the key to human evolution. We make this mistake all the time by trusting a person by his wisdom rather than their personality itself. A person can be a holder of arcane knowledge but it is of no use if he isn’t a good person by heart. An ill-hearted person can destroy another’s life without even one understanding it. Thus intelligence cannot be the main factor while befriending someone.
Evermore so, many might think it is wisdom and talent of a person that drives him through innovating something. But, the truth is a mentally wounded, apprehensive scientist will take his job much more seriously if he has something to lose down the line. If his mother or father or a close relative is sick and he is in the driving seat of innovating something, he will use all his energy and dedication to finding the cure to that pathogen. Humanity thus, has always been a key factor in innovation and galvanizing new things.

To add more, a person may be very intelligent and wise but somethings need physical knowledge and training. A person cannot swim even though he has full knowledge of the aerodynamics of the fluid. He cannot ride a bicycle even if he knows the nitty-gritty of the cycle’s mechanism. It is the practical experience that helps him through overcoming things. His dedication in doing things over and over, and practicing makes him a veteran in that task. This applies to job fields too. A freshly graduated college student may know the theory behind a four-stroke engine, but handling or making one is a completely different genre to him. A freshly graduated MBA student will know the proper ways of working in an office only if he gets a hands-on experience.

Still, intelligence is not something that you can neglect completely. A scientist can never be in the driving seat of a project if he does not have the required knowledge. Similarly, the same goes for the students too. If a student does not pass college or his MBA finals, he will never get appointed to a post where he could actually get practical knowledge.

To summarize, although it is safe to say intelligence is necessary but it cannot be the main factor to overcome obstacles and problems with intelligence. Humanity, experience and believing in oneself can truly get one out of trouble.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: A
Humanity revolves around intelligence.A person who is wise has always been the ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...life without even one understanding it. Thus intelligence cannot be the main factor ...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun might seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much might', 'a good deal of might'.
Suggestion: much might; a good deal of might
...ile befriending someone. Evermore so, many might think it is wisdom and talent of a pers...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...innovation and galvanizing new things. To add more, a person may be very intell...
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... only if he gets a hands-on experience. Still, intelligence is not something tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, similarly, so, still, thus, while, i think, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88583509514 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92124348432 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509513742072 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 736.2 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.915467147 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5925925926 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5185185185 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139237153908 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427097810288 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741559484292 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824610513311 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774579469066 0.0667264976115 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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