Describe the statistics in this bar chart about sports participation by gender.
The bar chart illustrates a certain striking difference between the proportion of male participation in sports and the other of female participation divided into ten different categories based on the UK Department for culture, media, and sports.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that football attracts most of the male participation while most females have an interest in yoga. And, equality is nearly found in the participation of health and fitness. In terms of male participation, the percentage of participants on sports during this period of time was considered as the top band at football (with 90,8%), golf (with 86%) and cycling from place to place as well as for recreation (with 68,9% and 68,3% respectively). The middle band included a significant majority of sports participation which was occupied by the male at hiking and running (with 62,7% and 60,2% in turns) However, the percentage of aerobics and dance's participation was at the bottom band together with yoga which was made up of 24,1% and 17,5%. In terms of female participation, the proportion was not as high as the male one. While a vast majority of football's participation was occupied by men, a tiny percentage was formed by women with 9,2%. In contrast, over three-quarters of females joined in aerobics and dance with 75,9% which was three times lower compared to male's participation. In addition, yoga was formed with the highest percentage (82,5% of the total).
In conclusion, it's interesting to note that women dominated the proportion of indoor sports' participation ( aerobics and yoga which needs less physical challenge) whereas male's participation seems more interested in outdoor sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, well, whereas, while, as for, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 3.97073170732 479% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2276119403 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08615024682 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9547371955 43.030603864 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.1 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.23603664747 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146937106422 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605254923615 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549196440847 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124969223437 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433890820757 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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