The material progress and well being of a country are necessarily connected to the material progress and well being of all other countries
Material development of a country surely depends on its own resources and dwellers but other countries can play a vital role in accelerating this development. Healthy influence of other’s progression can push its own development and wellbeing to a great extent.
We live in a competitive world where every country wants to target to be the best. Such as, underdeveloped countries want to raise to developing country or developing countries want to be developed. Even developed countries champion for being the most developed. This competition creates an urge for a country to rise above. We have seen it even pushes the most developed countries to be better. Thus, comparison with other country’s progression creates competitiveness which urges the country’s own progression.
Another aspect of progression of other country’s is that the less developed countries can find help in the crying need of its own. For example, Bangladesh is a developing country,infrastructural development is very poor here and that’s why Bangladesh often takes huge loans for different kinds of development work from developed countries. Such as recently Japan has given 320 crores of loan to Bangladesh for its development works. Again, during natural calamities when poor countries become devastated then we have seen the other countries helping them. Many countries are granting help for the development of miserable condition in African countries. That’s how countries help to uplift each other in the crisis. Thus progression of a country is actually largely dependent on others.
1st world countries often imports human resource from 3rd world countries. This thing actually grows the economy of both countries.3rd world countries often cannot have enough sectors to utilize its resources.If there wasn’t any other country’s influence, they would have been more miserable.
Though there are many good aspects of the influence of other’s success, excessive success gives the country an unethical power to dominate over others. Often under developed countries are exploited in the name of help from developed ones. We have also seen an unhealthy competition among first world countries to be the best. It even destroyed many poor countries.
In the name of grating loans, progressed countries have been seen to take high interest which in reality destroyed economy even more. Thus being developed than others gave them the chance of misusing the power.
Though there are obviously some malicious practices in terms of excessive differences of development of the countries, a country itself can’t push itself to the limit without the help or influence of others. A healthy influence of other countries can always place a greater effect on a country’s material progress and wellbeing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , infrastructural
...mple, Bangladesh is a developing country,infrastructural development is very poor here and that’...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...elp to uplift each other in the crisis. Thus progression of a country is actually la...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...enough sectors to utilize its resources.If there wasn’t any other country’s influ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rces.If there wasn’t any other country’s influence, they would have been more mis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2368.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48148148148 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05142467682 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49537037037 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 706.5 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1835822662 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.72 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.28 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320117284683 0.243740707755 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121140906335 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765999935937 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185039446355 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575198057068 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.1639044944 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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