In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
With concurrent technologies, adverts are accompanied by a cyber link. society can see advertisements everywhere. And loads of them are trying to deliver the messages that they are the latest. There are several reasons why they want to tell people that they are new. Also, I think that the cons might be more than pons.
Firstly, since those new inventions claim that they are the first in their fields, others cannot mimic or even use them. For example, when the Apple company clarify that the apple is its products’ logo, nobody can utilize it anymore. Another reason why businesses emphasise this is that the folk may want to try their creativity. Research has been found that the folk tend to buy novelty things or something they have never touched before. Additionally, those marketing planners may exercise these selling methods to achieve their goals and increase sales.
However, too many adverts saying they are the newest may also bring some negative impactions. First, since they are expanding their fames, they definitely exhibit a lot in various ways such as on the net platforms or on the buses. Originally, society may still watch these videos or ads. When time passes by, society may become annoyed or bothered and eventually may not want to see or even ignore them. What’s more, the public may not want to be the first user. In nowadays’ world, there is an army of reviews or recommendations on the internet. Before those consumers buy, they obviously search for them. As a result, this may lessen the selling numbers.
To conclude, I consider that the sunny sides are more than the dark sides in emphasizing they are renovating. Yet, it also has its downsides in particular situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, for example, i think, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58700595793 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9007168367 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.55 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153064577945 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414090823229 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055177934087 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801836543308 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606916425376 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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