A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, the proposed new jazz club in Monroe, the C-Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's annual jazz festival last summer; several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe; and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight at 7 P.M. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment
As per the application submitted, group of developers have proposed to develop a new jazz club in Monroe.
The developers came to this idea by taking into consideration the current neareast jazz club which is 65 miles
away as well as keen interest of people of Monroe in jazz giving supporting fact that the highest-rates radio
program in Monroe is "Jazz Nigtly". However, before this proposal can be properly evaluated three questions are needed
to be answered.
First of all, are the 1 million people who attended the Monroe's annual Jazz function were all localities? In other words
is there no possibility that some or many of these 1 million people were from neighbour cities? It is possible that
there might not be any such jazz event took place in Monroe since many years and people might have attended this
function only of curiousity. Further there is a possibility that Monroe's Jazz event was mostly attended by people
from remote areas and not by the localities. If either of this possibilities are true then it casts doubt
on the profitability of building a jazz club in Monroe.
Secondly, What is the probability that Jazz would be popular in the coming future ? There might be a case wherein
jazz might get replaced by some other genre and which would definitely affect the clubs profit. Since any development project
can be completed in few months and sometimes can also take years to complete. Taking this into consideration there might be
a possibility that jazz had been replaced by some other genre till the time the club was getting build. History has presented
us many such situation werein popular stuff of one time is getting neglected in coming years. In real world any situation is
unpredictable and can happen anytime and as we should learn from history but it is not patent that such things can happen
with jazz too. If the above comes to be true, then this makes one dubious about the profitability of the jazz club.
Finally, What is the average spending of Monroe's local public on jazz clubs? In other words, can't it be the case that
local Monroe public spent too less than the nations avearge expenditure on jazz entertainment? Monroe public may have a
mindset of saving money instead of spending on entertainment events. If the average expense of localities comes out to
be far less than the average presented then how can one say that these people will spend above average or say equal to
average on entertainment. While making such clubs this condition must be taken into consideration. If this rationale
comes to be true then what guarantees the jazz club profit and loan repayment.
In conclusion, the argument, as it stands now, is considerably flawed due to its reliance on several unwarranted
assumptions. IF the author is able to answer the above three questions and offer more evidence(perhaps in the
form of systematic research ), then it would be possible to fully evaluate the viability of the proposed
development project to build a jazz club in moroe.
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- A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise Currently the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away thus the proposed new jazz club in Monroe the C Note would have the local market all to itself Plus jazz is extremely popular in Mon 69
- Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts who are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public 50
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 512 350
No. of Characters: 2445 1500
No. of Different Words: 238 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.757 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.775 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.648 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 108 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.261 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.619 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.739 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.509 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ent neareast jazz club which is 65 miles away as well as keen interest of people ...
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...l public on jazz clubs? In other words, cant it be the case that local Monroe publ...
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... entertainment? Monroe public may have a mindset of saving money instead of spend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.6327345309 168% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2548.0 2260.96107784 113% => OK
No of words: 512.0 441.139720559 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9765625 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74757493836 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 204.123752495 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478515625 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 705.55239521 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.70958083832 369% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.22255489022 237% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9838915451 57.8364921388 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.782608696 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2608695652 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13043478261 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 27.0 5.15768463074 523% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.25449101796 362% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416103969744 0.218282227539 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13752726446 0.0743258471296 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931682579698 0.0701772020484 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130150535379 0.128457276422 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100280503891 0.0628817314937 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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