You ordered an item from an online store and it has arrived damaged
Write a letter to the retailer to complain. In the letter:
– Explain why you are unhappy
– Request a refund
– Make arrangements to return the damaged item
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently ordered a Kitchenmax blender from your online shop, and was disappointed to discover that the glass portions of the appliance had been smashed during transit.
I would have expected the package to be wrapped more effectively in order to avoid incidents such as this, but there was almost no padding material in the box. I would like you to arrange for the return of the item and to process a full refund as soon as is convenient, since the blender was intended to be a gift for an occasion that has already passed.
The order number was KX3564686, and it was delivered on 24/09/2017.
If you need to book a time for a courier to collect the parcel, you can contact me at this email address, but it must be within the next two weeks as I will be moving to Washington.
Kind regards,
Angela Bradford
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... almost no padding material in the box. I would like you to arrange for the retur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 696.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53793926919 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9131354957 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14451016286 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583511683491 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593695944383 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733825898549 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414031390587 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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