The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.’
The diagram illustrates the transformation of town of Denham from year 1986 to present time. As an overview, it is apparent that there are a lot of changes happened in the town of Denham , like the farmlands in the past were all turned to housing areas, the gardens were replaced by a retirement home, the shops are no longer available in present time. Meanwhile, the river Stoke waterways ramained the same as well as the post office and still the exact spot for the primary school location with little adjustment to its size from the previous one.
To start with in year 1986, the farmland areas were rampant throughout the town of Denham, located on the southwest of the town and also on the northeast side of it. Meanwhile as years passed by, in farmland were converted into residential site. The post office remained its structure until the present day as well as the bridge and primary school but there are two houses located nearby the school area. Furthemore, there gardens in the past were no longer available in present time since I was converted into a retirement home from the three large houses from the past, they attached two large houses from the nortwing and south wing respectively. Exactly opposite to the retirement home is an empty square block sorrounded by nine houses along side the river Stoke. Indeed, a lot of transformation happened throughout the year.
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- TASK ONE The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- PROPOSITION Some people think governments should spend money on measures to save languages with few speakers from dying out completely Others think this is a waste of financial resources PROMPT Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... school, bridge and the post office. In addition the river Stoke maintains it waterways ...
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Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t throughout the town of Denham, located southwest of the town, also on the nort...
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Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Denham, located southwest of the town, also on the northeast side of it. Meanwh...
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Line 2, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...own, also on the northeast side of it. Meanwhile as years passed by, the farmland were c...
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Line 2, column 404, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... houses located nearby the school area. furthermore, there gardens in the past were no long...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, well, while, in addition, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81142857143 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57146666638 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548571428571 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1799463271 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.23603664747 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149639151605 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740688102051 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629592723412 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131985209858 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173686563983 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.