In any enterprise, the process of making or doing something is ultimately more important than the final product.
every stage of production matters and each step is important for a successful result. No matter the effort you put into making something, the result is always more important than the process it underwent. For any given enterprise final produce is more important than the doing processes because what is shown to the society is not the process but the result of the all the steps.
In making any type of product, it may take a long or short process. For example, to make a cake, it would take several hours and each stage of making must be well done to avoid errors in the result. I think this is much important to the person making it but not to the consumers. one time ago, I told my younger sister to help with baking a cake and i told her what to avoid and what she must do. Surprisingly looking at me like have told her to do the impossible. After everything she realised the amount of effort put into making a cake and that every process was important but the product carried much weight of importance.
one thing a leader of a particular project tells his team mate is that every step is important.this is usually based on the type of project to be carried out. A man building a car taking each step as much important as the product but no matter how these steps matters to him, if he doesnt get desired result, he will feel like he wasted all his time and effort. Also,that product is most important, that should not give room to circumvent any process of production.
In conclusion, if it took you years of making, and result does not account for it, then you have not done enough. what you put into making is the evidence of your result. any good enterprise understands that product is as a result of taking steps which are important. Therefore, i agree that product is much more important than process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45345345345 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45675013113 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489489489489 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8766324309 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6875 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358862782404 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135454335279 0.0831039109588 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116045784158 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237553928505 0.150359130593 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115925026377 0.0667264976115 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.