The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram descirbes the process to how to shape a glass container.
Overall, it can be seen that it is a linear process of shaping a glass container in 9 steps. Starting from the first step that is putting the glass pieces in the furnace whereas at the last segregate the end product into packaging and waste.
To begin with, the first step of shaping a glass is to put the glass pieces in furnace; heat it till 105 degree celcius. After that it goes to mould 1 for pressing which gives it a shape with thick wall so that it will move forward to mould 2. Here the glass gets the final shape and leave it in air for some time.
Furthermore, after all that process it will goes to a Kiln for making the glass more hot which will take it to around 482 degree celcius, although making the glass this hot is a process to make it more robust. It is because after this process it goes directly for cooling at 25 degree celcius for 60 minutes. Lastly, quality check inspector will check all the glasses personally and segregate glasses into waste or final product.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at it will move forward to mould 2. Here the glass gets the final shape and leave...
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Line 7, column 45, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...hermore, after all that process it will goes to a Kiln for making the glass more hot...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, lastly, so, whereas, after all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39393939394 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20422001138 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7815620406 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161117288786 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808166714569 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516277471801 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119043967341 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030023550934 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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