Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there are many individuals who opine that zoos are inhumane and should be shut down, while others suggest zoos play an important role as homes for animals. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument and provide my perspective which supports the formal.
On the one hand, animals will be safe in zoos where they are provided with accommodations, food and drinks. Zoo helps wild animals stay away from hunters and natural disasters (deforestation, drought, wildfire, landslide…). However, according to a recent research, 70-75% of animals in zoos are not under threat and need protection. Furthermore, zoo animals might face a plethora of dangers which are brought by people who come to the zoo. For instance, visitors can easily feed the animals without any checking process and if a mad terrorist gave an elephant a bomb, no one would know what happens.
On the other hand, most animals being taken to zoos are locked in cages. That leads to two significant consequences: wild animals lose their freedom and survival instinct like hunting. For example, professor Nguyen Cao Ky Duyen who works for Vietnam Science and Technology Institution has done a survey which showed that a tiger after staying in cages for 6 months to one year and eating food that is prepared by humans will gradually forget how to hunt a bait. In my opinion, zoos nowadays should be replaced with other places which allow animals to return to their wildlife such as safari, national parks, and animal conservation centers.
In conclusion, zoos should be closed down and changed to better facilities which are more friendly to animals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'disasters'' or 'disaster's'?
Suggestion: disasters'; disaster's
...mals stay away from hunters and natural disasters deforestation, drought, wildfire, lands...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06985294118 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61710740885 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0407826186 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.916666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314314536518 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120914772943 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744713497552 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194836159655 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114207148039 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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