In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Our ancestors did not live more than 50-55 years. From the last century medical sector is growing rapidly in the advanced countries. Therefore, lifespan of a normal individual has increased to 60-65 years. However, many voices think that this positive trend creates many issues for persons and communities. In the following paragraphs would address the issues and propose a handful of remedial measurements.
There are many factors that helps to increase the life-span of a single person such as, medical achievements, quality of life, social and health education. Despite this positive trend, it has many problems. Firstly, it will affect the government’s budget. To elucidate this, as the agedness increases, the number of senior people increases therefore authority must provide a retirement budget and medical care fund. Secondly, the number of people senior citizens rises, automatically population density rises, which demand more housing consequently pricing of the properties rises.
However, some steps officials could consider resolving this problem. One of the ways is that authority could extend the retirement age. many developed countries retirement age is 55 years, they could increase to 60 or 65 if senior people are healthy and prime condition. Another way is that authority could obtain higher taxes from the locals and businesspersons, which could be used in government retirement funds. Therefore, it would reduce the government’s budget burden.
Furthermore, the government could provide subsidies to the new home buyer.
In conclusion, human’s life span increases, and I believe that it would demand the retirement fund and higher prices of properties. To resolve this problem administration should extend retirement age, obtained higher taxes, and provide subsidies for the properties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71062271062 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93338675927 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2519840781 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6111111111 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170782263106 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516322905384 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383729444501 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085617811662 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404043143004 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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