Education is imperative to attain the academic knowledge. It is argued that print materials should be banned in education institutes and newer technology must be used for imparting education. I do believe in modernization of the schools but at the same time I am of the belief that books should not be totally stopped.
Some people are of the view that videos, films and computers should be the only source in the schools for disseminating information and imparting education. They believe that it will lead to modernization and pupils will not have to carry heavy bags to the school. For instance, there are some musculoskeletal problems which are being reported due to carrying of books to the intitutes. To curb these problems, this method is being put forth for implementation.
On the other hand, by accepting this method, the culture of reading books will slowly diminish and book reading hobbies will be on the verge of extinction in a near future. Screen time of the children will be increased exponentially. For example, more times will be devoted by children on computers both at schools and home. This will lead to the refraction problems. There will be more dependence on the machines. Moreover it will be difficult for those who can not afford the high-tech machines like computers or tablets.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that education imparting method should be updated by decreasing the print media, but it should not be totally stopped.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 416, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ill be more dependence on the machines. Moreover it will be difficult for those who can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99591836735 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88296205676 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518367346939 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0686955612 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33934340269 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125309390363 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920490010618 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232650859753 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496070116202 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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