Dear Sir,
My name is Ronald and I am a Masters student living on University campus accommodation. My identification number is RN236253SB staying in south block room no-23. I am writing this letter to complain about problem with internet connection in my room and perhaps you could help me.
Recently, I opted for online classes as current lockdown rules constrained me from attending classes. Relying on fast broadband services available at our hostel, I booked for some language classes as well. However, severe network problems hindering my studies and some times takes hours to get just login to college website. On the other hand, because of many people trying to connect through same router, none of us are able to utilise internet services.
On behalf of all tenants, I request you to kindly fix the problem by either installing few more modems or provide different LAN lines in our rooms. Probably, we need to update our services to 5G as demand for online education is increasing. Another approach is, to schedule different time slots so that every once of us can have uninterrupted network. Please understand, time is crucial for me as deadline to present my thesis is very near.
Hoping to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ronald
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72490143544 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730769230769 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5265526839 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160980756701 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559657486955 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674378983141 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877086782035 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704548244002 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0625 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72490143544 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.730769230769 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5265526839 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160980756701 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559657486955 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674378983141 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877086782035 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704548244002 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.