You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter:
• Say how you feel about his performance
• Give details of your musical activities
• Explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Mam,
It is been immense pleasure to be the part of the live concert, where you delivered the performance.
The overall show was so impressive, that till the end it kept the audiences involved and entertained.
Although, my inclination towards the music has been since my childhood, but the role models like
you really kept the spark alive and inspired me to carry on with this profession. Over the past few
years, I have learned to play all sought of musical instruments, but guitar is one which still needs lot
of improvement. Above all, while I see you performing live with guitar, my intent to perform like you
really enhances.
I would be glad, if you could spare time out of your busy schedule, to provide me with lessons on
guitar and how to build confidence in front of live audiences. Looking forward for positive response
from your side, kindly contact me over the phone or drop a message, as I am keen to meet you for the same.
Yours Truly
Rohan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69942196532 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5318842858 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699421965318 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.5315753011 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.625 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247142220971 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983121364887 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584182101794 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089575970846 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607010514135 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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