Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Entertainment segment is becoming quite popular these days. People feel the need for a break from their daily chores. So, they watch movies to get rid of monotony. However, where a person want to watch a movie is solely a personal choice. On the one side, people choose to see films at homes. On the other hand, some people go to cinema.
Firstly, I will discuss about those who are in favour of watching movies on their mobile phones. People prefer to do so mainly because they feel more comfort. They do not need to dress up and step out of the homes to watcha movie. They can better enjoy it while sitting at home. They can choose their position as per their own convenience. For instance, some people like to see films by lying on the bed. What is more, people can watch the movies whenever they get free time unlike cinemas where one have to rush for films on particular time. It also saves transportation costs.
However, there are some people who love to watch movies in cinemas primarily because one can enjoy it more on big screen. Small screens like phones or tablets put more strain on eyes as well as impact the posture. Furthermore, one may get disturbed at home while watching movies. An illustration of same is, someone in the family may call for any task to do so this may spoil the mood. Despite, one feel refreshed when go out for a movie.
To recapitulate, I would say different people have different choices. People choose where to see movies depends on multiple factors such as time, comfort, cost etcetera. But if I have to mention my opinion, I will prefer to watch films at homes due to their plethora of benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... better enjoy it while sitting at home. They can choose their position as per their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55555555556 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35289702957 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.767594816 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.5 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.40909090909 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199726678484 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613031180812 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635261129409 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126669847694 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310684602849 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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