Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with the young people .What problems does this cause and what are the solutions.
Nowsays, older people who need employment have to compete with the young people in dafence of life somebody needs a job for raise the wind. Money is good reseived occeptance for good an service.
In the one hand, the main cause of this problem dafence of live. Where the older people or young people to complete for getting a job and survive.
Ussually older people more leads to living support. Whereas the youth is more the experience.
For example older people has benefit like child benefit, annuity, alimony, sick benefit, dole and other things.
At the some time for young people try a job for experience and filling life's necessities like eat, drink and other things.
The other reasons for this problem is cause pandemic in indonesia many people specially older peopel get the axe. So that must search new a job. Beside that many young people specially fresh graduation also need a job.
This is where competition for employment.
That solution for this problem is goverment must decide such of money for help where the need is greates or give a hand such medicine for ades people. Food relief for those who are hungry.
At the same time for young people must should be more creative and can create jobs of its own.
All in all, about this problem about older people or young people similarly need a job but certain condition make them have to compete in getting jobs. Everything to do with survival.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ey is good reseived occeptance for good an service. In the one hand, the main ca...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...er people more leads to living support. Whereas the youth is more the experience. For...
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Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...enefit, dole and other things. At the some time for young people try a job for exp...
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Line 6, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ple specially older peopel get the axe. So that must search new a job. Beside that many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, whereas, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77235772358 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23108155369 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532520325203 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3136370826 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0588235294 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353255522127 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121287057577 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10896052694 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159107872788 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992256042302 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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