In the world today,the use of internet services is rapidly increasing. The internet is accepted generally as the best way of communicating, however some individual are of the opinion that it is wrong site to search for information. The prons and cons of communicating through the internet will be analysed and I am of the opinion that online interaction should be encouraged in order to make things easier and accessible .
To begin with, online communication still remain the best worldwide and is universally acceptable by the people. This is due to the role it plays especially in this era of pandemic. Firstly, the use of online communication enabled schools to hold their E-learning classes write examinations and learn other skills while the children were at home. For example,since February 2020,that the lock down started,most schools still conduct online classes where the children interact with their teachers and friends without feeling the impact of lock down. Also,most children were promoted to the next class because they were able to do what they would have ought to do if schools is on. Moreover,the internet interaction have really saved some home that would have been broken by now because of lack of communication. Especially spouses that are not living together.
On the other hand, despite the benefits of communicatin online,there are some other issues that will come up as a result of seeking for knowledge online and they are increase in the number of bad gangs and groups among the teenagers . The teenagers tend to misbehave and disobey rules. Youngsters have access to some violent and sexual images. For instance, last 2 weeks a son of a soilder killed his friend that visited him with the gun of his father mistakenly because he wanted to practicalize the movie he watched.
To sum up, internet interaction is very vital in our daily life. I am of the opinion that children should be monitored and supervised while the search for information to aviod getting wrong knowledge that will endanger their lives and that of the loved ones . Also, internet interaction should be encouraged to make things easier and accessible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, really, so, still, while, for example, for instance, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0988700565 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8579336523 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545197740113 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3015868311 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.176470588 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124163486508 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409293470087 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443124359059 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881894888213 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639057113965 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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