Good evening sir
Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations .
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some individual believe that it is best to tolerate any ugly circumstance like unworthy work and lack of money whereas others are of the opinion to adjust our life in such situation . For me ,it is better to adjust our life in any condition but still look for a way to amend it later after adapting. Both sides of the argument will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, every individual try to adapt in any situation in life in order to succeed. Some tolerate any condition they found themselves into and this is not because they like it but due to that there is no other alternative. For example,in my country Nigeria,most graduate are unemployed,some engage themselves in menial job. This is not because they enjoy it but it is for them to progress in life, hence they have to accept the undesirable job.
Turning to the other side of the argument where some are if the opinion to enhance any bad condition. It is better to adjust any condition that is not good, reason being that it will make the individual to go higher and achieve the target goal. An example can be seen among low income earners who still struggle to work in order to get promotion and earn bigger than before.
In conclusion, having looked at both views analysed, i am of the opinion that it still better to accept any situation in life but while adapting necessary measures should be taken to improve it in order to get the stipulated goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 5.60731707317 624% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 299.0 196.424390244 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66555183946 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59766674923 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 106.607317073 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511705685619 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2721874544 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382160202831 0.215688989381 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146643062545 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146976140374 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25739653735 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.214112994223 0.0819641961636 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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