Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
recently, the question of whether higher education or skill and experience could ensure a well-paid job has heated a controversial debate. in my opinion, i strongly believe that university education contributes significantly to future career.
on the one hand, university may unsuitable for some jobs requiring creativity, for example, students majoring in art may find Math theories are unhelpful and time wasting. therefore, they can drop out of university to have more time to practice their skill and gain experience. additionally, university seems to be unaffordable to some people whose lower income. while others try to enter university, they are likely to attend vocational courses providing practical skills. furthermore, these courses are not only time-saving but also cost-efficient.
on the other hand, university degree can secure a dream job. first, qualification becomes more and more common criteria in recruitment. the reason behind is that students have to overcome different examinations in university to graduate so that they are extremely well-trained. as a result, they are knowledgeable enough to work in the specific area. take doctor as an example. to become a doctor, students must undergo medical training so as to get qualification. without it, they are not able to cure illness and diseases. secondly, better qualification can offer higher paid jobs. it means that a student with in-depth knowledge would be paid higher than those not. to clarify, an engineer whose university degree will absolutely earn better living than a blue worker in a factory.
to conclude, tertiary education is more fundamental than both skill and experience in getting a dream job. in my opinion, higher education is a key to expand future career ladder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10178620894 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625454545455 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5782049085 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4210526316 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4736842105 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237753019003 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649249036108 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675619125103 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15245996867 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468719777137 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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