private schools offer opportunity that public schools do not, and all the parents who can afford to send their children to private school should do so.
Are private schools really better that public school? while some may gainsay this position, a large number would agree with me to corroborate this question with personal experience or news tally. Private schools are not directly responsible to government which give them ample freedom and opportunity to explore and experiment with education techniques and infrastructure as well. so, in my view if parents can afford and if they vacillate between sending their kid to public or private school they should assuring do so.
Recent studies have shown a large increase in number of private school in past 10 years. With augmenting numbers, each private school strives to be the best in this competing environment for their prosperous future. This engenders a better teaching staff, increase sanitized building and washrooms and creative learning. while as a matter of fact public schools are not found in pristine conditions along with faculties and teachers whose teaching standards and attitude towards the children is not the same and amiable comparatively. Since Private school elicits more fees as compared to public school they provide numerous extra curricular activities, programs for creative learning and a competitive environment which implicitly helps in shaping an individual as a whole. While these incentives are far fetched in public schools, they are not imparted much importance maybe because of lack of funds.
However, people favoring public school might argue that the hike in fees is a governing factor for discouraging them to send their ward to private school. As a matter of fact it has also been noticed that children enjoy more freedom and less restrictions and rule and regulations in public school which helps them evolve better as a person. considerately, public schools are less money minded and focus more on education since they dont have to fret about other recreational activities or lab.
Concluding, i have provided sufficient evidence to support my claim and why i promote parents to send their child to private school than public school.
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| 2020-10-12 | shreyabang | 50 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, really, so, well, while, as a matter of fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 330.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31212121212 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74132574685 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0735963082 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.214285714 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476860482008 0.243740707755 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179194093995 0.0831039109588 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1408956956 0.0758088955206 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314616200363 0.150359130593 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721394550889 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.