The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people into developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
is it true that in this incessant fast pacing world technology is soon going to take over mankind ? as a matter of fact technology and human intelligence go in hand in hand with each other. If there will be no human input , the technology would have no merit and vice a versa. But is this an impediment for human's apogee? does it hampers their intrinsic capability to explore and evolve? there is no doubt that luxury and conveniences have made life of people so simple and easy that even to transfer money from bank its just a click away on our smartphones. But in my views, this modernization is imperceptibly thwarting the efforts of human to transform into truly strong and independent individuals. And i have some instances to corroborate my claim.
while some may argue proposing that technology was created to make life easy and comfortable so that even for switching on or off the fan a person wouldnt have to move and could directly do it from a touch on the phone. while this a very small scale example, looking at the big picture, they abstain an individual to explore their environment or even exploit their creative thinking which helps them evolving themselves in an independent human . Reminiscing, A perfect example of prove this is kamram chandra Mahatma ghandhi, the father of the nation. back in those days technology meant a mere telephone or Television. people had no access to any means for empowering their views or standing up for bringing a sustainable change to the world. Neither did this forestall mahatma ghandhi for emerging as a powerful leader nor did it obscure his motivation and power to bring about that change. not being under the influence of any media or luxuries bolstered his pertinacious effort to strive for puissance and change.
As sufficient evidence manifests the ill effects of getting consumed by tech world, others may disagree with me supporting the fact that its individuals wish to get influenced by luxuries and technology around him/her its taking a toll on their personal development one way or another and world is soon going to realize that only i hope its better late than never.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, while, no doubt, as a matter of fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86338797814 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75412095731 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614754098361 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.6263736145 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129561154746 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033478170763 0.0831039109588 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571159093011 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797742708644 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356473598334 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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