The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Being in good health has become a hot topic in recent years. In future the average health standard of people would decrease than it is today. This essay will argue why average health standards in the future will reduce than it is now.
Although some people believe that consuming fast food will not affect their health standards. Eating fast food on daily basis have become a habit that they do not want to change because they think it is healthy and have adopted the taste of it. For instance, around 95% of the people in China have the habit of consuming burgers because of the belief that it is healthy. Due to this reason, people's average health standards would not be affected.
In contrast to this believe that having fast food would not lower health standard's, it is entirely justified that these people are ill-informed and have a flawed understanding. The average standard of people's health will reduce because of the excessive consumption of the fast food in the future. Without realizing the impact of such foods, people have made them a part of their daily routines. For instance, a research was conducted in the UK in the year 2009 that eating fast foods lowers health standard by 5% in 2 years.
In conclusion, people's health standard will be likely to decline in the future. This essay argued that people who are with the daily consumption of fast food underestimate its effect on health standards. In my opinion, fast food consumption should be stop and a healthy diet should be followed to control the health standards.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the future will reduce than it is now. Although some people believe that consuming fast...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...d not be affected. In contrast to this believe that having fast food would not lower h...
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Line 4, column 251, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'stopped'?
Suggestion: stopped
...pinion, fast food consumption should be stop and a healthy diet should be followed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7969924812 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46139277782 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462406015038 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7935853378 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313878231318 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13880046148 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944729435574 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222681224818 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791021743761 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.