It is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The issue that is raised in the prompt is that humans define themselves through their personal relationships. While personal relationships play a major role in the development of humas characteristics and traits it is also true that broader groups significantly influence their personalities and behaviors. After exploring all the facets of the issue, I firmly believe that the groups that humans are part of shape and define their identity. There are several reasons that prop this view and make the other untenable.
The chief reason of my view is that social groups that humans join during their life influence in the greatest extend the development of their personality. For instance, the very first group that a human join is its family. Family is the first milestone in this process. Children’s personality reflects the education and morals that have been taught from their family. The unconditional love and care that a child has received from its family will greatly affect his/her trajectory in life.
Another compelling reason why this stance may be valid is that humans have the tendency to mimic behaviors that are acceptable by the majority. Does not this necessarily mean that humans only absorb the positive characteristics of these behaviors. However, this is scientifically proven by psychologists and it is called the “bystander effect”. In particularly it is more possible that a human will assimilate characteristics and behaviors of the norm just because this is internally tuned from our nature.
Some will argue that only personal interactions with individuals shape the personality and identity of a human. However, this argument overlooks that rarely individuals act on their own base. There are numerous factors that influence their actions and behaviors. Economic, religious, and political reasons may greatly influence their perception and view of thigs.
To sum up, the broader groups that a member is part of affect the identity, actions and behaviors of a human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, may, so, while, for instance, in particular, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34810126582 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99807661464 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518987341772 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4476624596 60.3974514979 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0755878254389 0.243740707755 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252838630462 0.0831039109588 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227792198203 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429711780673 0.150359130593 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179221781541 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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