The only way to improve road safety is to impose severe punishment for driving offences. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is widely argue that enforcing serious punishment on traffic-violated cases is likely to be the only approach to enhance road safety. Personally, I believe this solution is a feasible and effective one, but there are also other ways to mitigate driving offences.
Were this policy put into practice, many law breaking cases have decrease significantly for this obvious reason. It is appropriate to say that money has always been the top priority to a vast majority. Therefore, by increasing the fine for each law-breaking case, citizens will try their best not to violate the law. As an inevitable consequence, the traffic law will be complied strictly which is inextricably associated with the reduction in traffic crash cases.
However, it is my firm belief that there are also other approaches that can be taken to decrease road jeopardy. The first solution I believe to be vitally effective is to increase road users’ knowledge of rules and solving problems skills. Indeed, despite drivers have passed the driving test and own a license, some inexperienced drivers are incapable of solving unexpected situations which will end up in traffic accidents. Therefore, the government should provision more free safety-driving courses and strict criteria for an individual to have their transportation driven on the road. Another approach that can be taken is to invest money into improving road infrastructure. For example, constructing separate lane for distinct means of transports such as buses, pedestrian, car drivers,… can minimize the risk of traffic crashes. Moreover, in some areas where accident rate is high, the State should consider setting up more traffic lights and signs and in the rush hours, there should be police officers to directly control and manage the road.
In closing, although the implement of imposing severe punishment in pursuit of improving road safety is a great way, the government is advised to re-consider because there are other ways can be taken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29337539432 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94010032335 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596214511041 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7462662027 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20331411351 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668523706654 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688330917108 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143017080354 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865589741296 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.