These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
In recent times, sports and cultural events are playing a major role in entertaining people. Whether the expenditure on attending such events is advantageous or disadvantageous is open for dispute. From my perspective, spending money to watch live shows has more cons than pros.
Admittedly, those who are enthusiastic about sports and have an urge to gather knowledge about their culture can both enjoy and learn from sporting and cultural events. Moreover, cultural events can be better enjoyed when people participate in them rather than just watching on screens. Nevertheless, it is undeniable that the sky-high prices of tickets for attending the tournaments and functions could be afforded only be rich people without any financial problems.
Although organizing companies and sponsors can benefit by earning during these events, middle-class individuals can suffer. This is because, exorbitant prices of tickets could put the buyer in debt for temporary enjoyment which is also possible at the a significantly lower cost. To exemplify, a vast array of cricket fans purchase tickets for world cup tournaments to enjoy the matches at stadiums, that can be relished at their homes on TV without any irrational expense. Due to irresponsible spending some people have to work overtime later on to pay the price, thus causing poor work-life balance and stress.
To recapitulate, the post effects and financial issues can hamper lives of middle-class population, therefore, the benefits of spending astronomical amount to go to sports and cultural events, which are particularly acute for affluent population and organizers, are outlaid by the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...ary enjoyment which is also possible at the a significantly lower cost. To exemplify,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02943728015 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6597791958 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193357652433 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694619185963 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0311145530131 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113406124145 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210314503512 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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