It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
The advancement at the breakneck speed of science and technologies these days is associated with the disappearance of various cultural and traditional customs. Hence, several people support the idea that this tendency is inevitable due to the contrary between these elements. From my perspective, while I agree that modern technologies may result in certain severe impacts on culture, I still hold the belief that human beings can develop cutting edge technologies while upholding our traditional values simultaneously
On the one hand, it does not seem unreasonable to suggest the adverse influence of advanced technologies on culture. One fundamental hazard is that along with the growth of transportations and communications, people are offered more opportunity to access different cultures throughout the world. Consequently, things available in any corner around the globe can easily be found in other nations, which allegedly damaged the uniqueness of cultural identity. An illustration of this is that Western culture has become dominant over others. and numerous people, especially youngsters, are copying the new lifestyles, thereby holding a nonchalant attitude toward their own culture.
Nevertheless, from my perspective, the advance in machinery is not synonymous with loss in traditional cultures. On the contrary, there is a variety of technological breakthrough that made a great contribution to the restoration and preservation of traditional cultures. By the way of exemplifying, with a state-of-the-art digital camera and other equipment, people are allowed to document traditional customs and rituals and maintain them on the computer in a straightforward way. Furthermore, since innovative technologies can boost the economy, it can monetarily attribute to the cultural restoration projects, which is spectacularly advantageous to traditional cultures as a whole
In conclusion, while modern technology may have some adverse impacts on cultures, the coexistence between them is possible. Developed equipment can contribute to the preservation and restoration of traditional culture both financially and technically
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while, in conclusion, by the way, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94174757282 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49066595339 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.3228738295 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.0 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337325149554 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114165391929 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620504145397 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202576566586 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542354091477 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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