2) A four week’s holiday can make employees do better at job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, society is more and more developing significantly, humans will face hardship every day. That is the reason why some people argue that many companies should give their staff at least a 4-week period on holiday every year, which helps them to work well in their business. In my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages of giving nearly a month-off for holiday for employees.
On the one hand, having four week’s holiday brings many benefits to people. First of all, when people can relax during their holidays, they will be reduced the amount of pressure in their job. Also, they can participate in outside activities or breath the fresh air, which is good for their mental and physical health so much. Finally, thank holidays, some individuals can come back to their hometown and visit their family after a long time no see. All of that will make everybody do their work efficiently.
On the other hand, having a long holiday can make a negative impact on employees. Firstly, once they are relaxed for a long time, that maybe make them lazier and their business will be put off. Moreover, they will lose their ability to reflex to analyze and solve works after a long period of inactivity. The fact that will make a large effect on the economic climate of a company.
In conclusion, four week’s holiday can make people comfortable, but companies should decide carefully to be good for their employees but also do not affect the company’s achievement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: CD_WEEK_S[1]
Message: The apostrophe is probably in the wrong place here. Did you mean 'four weeks' holiday'?
Suggestion: four weeks' holiday
...for employees. On the one hand, having four week’s holiday brings many benefits to people. First o...
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Line 2, column 30, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...mployees. On the one hand, having four week’s holiday brings many benefits to peopl...
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Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: CD_WEEK_S[1]
Message: The apostrophe is probably in the wrong place here. Did you mean 'four weeks' holiday'?
Suggestion: four weeks' holiday
...c climate of a company. In conclusion, four week’s holiday can make people comfortable, but compan...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...mate of a company. In conclusion, four week’s holiday can make people comfortable, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, at least, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.912 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54589866256 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6174853955 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182985459501 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726000390679 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06843707304 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131144409955 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072031496551 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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