A four week’s holiday can make employees do better at job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some inhabitants believe that employees can work better at job if they have a four week’s holiday which creats the big agruement between emloyers and employees. My opinion about this topic will indicate in my essays.
Worker said that they have to do under enormous pressures so they always can not show good performance in company. They need more time to reduce stress and balance between mental health and physical health. For example, they can spend more time staying with their family, organizing outside activities with their friends or doing some things they like which help employees increase spirit to prepare work with the best ability.
On the other hand, 4 week’s holiday is the long time and it make citizens lazy. In fact, employees have to face with difficult problem because they can not return to work with the best ability. Employees tend to want to rest more time when they underwent the long holiday. Moreover, they need more time to get used to working under lots of pressures which is the main reason why government and employers do not allow inhabitants to have a long rest. Especially, if all workers do not go to company in long time, the country will face with lots of issues. Most of kinds of job require employees to work with modern technologies such as electricy, water, robot,… but the modern technologies are managed by citizens so people can not be in long rest. So I think that employees shouldn’t have four week’s holiday, on the contrary, government and employers can allow inhabitants have many short holiday per year to go up spirit of citizents to do with their best ability. The more excited spirit employees possess, the more great performances appear.
To conclude, I believe that building a corporate culture that values longer annual holiday is an intring part of business success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: CD_WEEK_S[1]
Message: The apostrophe is probably in the wrong place here. Did you mean 'four weeks' holiday'?
Suggestion: four weeks' holiday
...s can work better at job if they have a four week’s holiday which creats the big agruement between ...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: CD_WEEK_S[1]
Message: The apostrophe is probably in the wrong place here. Did you mean '4 weeks' holiday'?
Suggestion: 4 weeks' holiday
...the best ability. On the other hand, 4 week’s holiday is the long time and it make citizens l...
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Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...e best ability. On the other hand, 4 week’s holiday is the long time and it make ...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
... week’s holiday is the long time and it make citizens lazy. In fact, employees have ...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the kinds') or simply say ''Most kinds''.
Suggestion: Most of the kinds; Most kinds
... country will face with lots of issues. Most of kinds of job require employees to work with m...
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Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...nologies such as electricy, water, robot,… but the modern technologies are managed...
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Line 3, column 791, Rule ID: CD_WEEK_S[1]
Message: The apostrophe is probably in the wrong place here. Did you mean 'four weeks' holiday'?
Suggestion: four weeks' holiday
...o I think that employees shouldn’t have four week’s holiday, on the contrary, government and employ...
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Line 3, column 796, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...hink that employees shouldn’t have four week’s holiday, on the contrary, government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, in fact, such as, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92903225806 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5154176 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4360193434 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230586483553 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846094588796 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706893323737 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132968906978 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726173918508 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.