would you prefer to buy new things or repair old things?
I would rather mend old things than buy new things because of the following reasons. Firstly, I will be saving a lot of money. It is obvious that price of a new thing is very high, so the best way to save money is to repair old things on my own. For example, I can sew my clothes when they are torn instead of paying much money for new clothes. Secondly, mending old things helps me spend less time going shopping. I am quite busy in my daily life, so I always try my best to consume the least time whenever i do the shopping. As an illustration, I often spend 30 minutes a day on buying some necessary things, but it can last between one and two hours to go shopping if I need select something new. Last but not least, my knowledge level can go up because of doing things by myself. I will never know how everything works if I do not observe them. The more I observe things around my life, the more knowledge I gather. My laptop, for example, was broken down last month, and I myself decided to repair it by searching for solutions online and trying each of them. Eventually, after several observation and failures, I succeeded. Whatever the reasons, i think repairing old things is better than buying new things in some cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several observations
... trying each of them. Eventually, after several observation and failures, I succeeded. Whatever the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32034632035 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41235489867 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.579981896 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7692307692 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361712886294 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13738457997 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167804924763 0.0667982634062 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.361712886294 0.151304729494 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 12.4159519038 60% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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