Questions: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Only two types of people are living in the world, the first is living in one town or city forever until death. And another people are likely to tend to move to other cities in their entire life. Surely enough, the two kinds of living styles have advantages respectively. Personally, I totally disagree with the statement regarding the topic.
To begin with, it is exceedingly important things in a person’s whole life that is in possession of rich experience and able to enrich themselves I believe. Moving to other places can allow people to own wider recognition about the world and also have chance to explore them. People are able to contact different local cultures and a pretty of knowledge which are totally new for people when they move there. Via these experience, people will be more positive and outgoing. Take me as an instance, in my whole life, I have moved to other cities for many times due to all kinds of factors and reasons. Although moving far away my friends and families in that city, I could not wait to contact new environment and culture due to curiosity. I always explore new place and make new friends there. And also via them to experience special things and talk each other stories. Undoubtedly, it offered me a lot of knowledge and helped me to expend my horizon so that filled my sense of satisfacation and enriched my life. It really bring vast funs for me instead of always staying in one city.
In addition, moving to other cities also can provide more opportunities for landing jobs. Most people who cannot find a job only desire to land a job in their city and never consider to develop in other cities. A number of people who are able to gain more salary and better career land a normal job in their city so that their life cannot be imporved optimally and cause the good labour to be used at lower level. The good example for this is concerning my uncle. He graduated from a high quality university in my city, and his level is higher than most people in the city even a part of people in other cities. However, he eventually landed a job in a company in my city due to the fact that he believed that living home city can give him sense of security and stable life and job. Even though he experienced a stable life, he was never satisfactory. Until his boss allowed him to go for business to other cities, he found a new opportunity to land a new job with high salary and better treatment.
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...acation and enriched my life. It really bring vast funs for me instead of always stay...
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...instead of always staying in one city. In addition, moving to other cities also...
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...e to land a job in their city and never consider to develop in other cities. A number of people who...
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... lower level. The good example for this is concerning my uncle. He graduated from a high qual...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, regarding, so, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1990.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50226244344 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45892944646 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495475113122 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1046839341 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40909090909 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163960455211 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512725972812 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396362531904 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131855033675 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576309535664 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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