A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction
Do you agree or disagree?
People are increasingly concerned about the risk of stress-related jobs meanwhile of earning too much money, although many would prefer to continue this way in job positioning ,some would care more about how much the job could fulfill their ambition and is a proper content for their significant personal achievements . I would definitely be on the side of the argument which is following personal satisfaction and would like to state my opinion in this essay.
To begin with, employees who earn a considerable income are generally under significant mental and emotional pressure to perform well and achieve targets. This leads many individuals to suffer high levels of stress which can result in physical and mental disorders. Unfortunately, some companies keep the salaries unpaid unless the sale targets are being driven out, so there is a big amount of stress among the staffs meanwhile of working extra time to fulfill this role and finally could get their rights back .this will definitely be harmful for anyone who continue this way even if the money which is paid would be high.
However, having a job which they will enjoy doing, and in which they feel valued, is a major concern for most of the modern work-forces. A considerable number of people are giving up well-paid positions to do jobs not only are paid less but also find more joy and freshness .As research shows, the more you are satisfied with your workplace and job, the higher your personal performance would reach.
A year ago, for instance, I left the teaching profession because the workload had become too much great and was becoming an out of control for me ; finding a balance between how I would like to spend the rest of my time and the my real free time was impossible. So what I can mention about how my feelings are going on after quitting this job , is feeling more relaxed, less stressed , and experiencing every moment of my social life without more job concern .
In conclusion, for a high percentage of the population , earning a substantial wage is less important than job satisfaction because of the negative effects of work-related stress and desire to feel happy and more fulfilled in a job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87464387464 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72672638154 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57264957265 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.4211888884 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.1 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179286816867 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068570716693 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640415396897 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108376063331 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577235983508 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.