People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime.
Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.
Lasting prison sentences longer is said to be the most effective measure to decrease the delinquency rate while other people hope that we still have several good methods for this issue. This topic will be shown in both two views and I think that I am more likely to support the second opinion.
In order to drop crime rapidly, giving longer prison sentences is one of the most effective methods. This has a large number of undisputed causes including retribution, rehabilitation, deterrence, and safety. It is evident that people need to be punished suitably if they did something wrong immorally. Murders, a particular example for this case, even should be served a life sentence for correcting their unethical behavior as well as deterring them from giving threats to the community.
There are still a host of different options that can decrease the crime rate. From the society perspective, it is essential for the public to improve their standards of living. To illustrate, the authorities can encourage or even create several work opportunities for the poor in order to increase their quality of life. In addition, the lighting systems should be expanded in all streets, especially small alleys where criminals are able to take an action easily. This might partially prevent wrongdoers' thoughts and the security will be enhanced more efficiently. From the school perspective, if the educational institutions can sometimes combine workshops associated with kind of crime, how to face offenders, and so on. Thus, schoolchildren can aware of doing something right or not.
In conclusion, it is also good for us to last inmate population longer while I personally support that there still have had other better solutions to control crime with these above - mentioned ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 112, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...of the most effective methods. This has a large number of undisputed causes including retribution...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21602787456 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85200944092 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630662020906 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.50516319 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.928571429 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252999582287 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734965499797 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675500948709 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15517083699 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627953463052 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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