Broccoli is a vegetable that is popular throughout the United States, but it can be grown only in temperate climates with mild summers. Because of this limitation, 90 percent of the broccoli consumed in the United States is grown in the cooler regions of California, on the West Coast. lt must be shipped 4, 000 kilometers across the entire country to reach the populous East Coast.
This situation may soon change, however: scientists are attempting to create a new type of broccoli that can be grown on the East Coast despite the hotter summers there. This project has several potential benefits.
First, growing broccoli on the East Coast and distributing it to nearby grocery stores would lower broccoli costs for consumers Transporting the vegetable from California by truck takes several days, which makes transportation costs high. Growing broccoli locally would reduce transportation costs, so stores could sell broccoli for less money.
Second, the new type of broccoli will probably be much more desirable to consumers than some other new crops. The new broccoli is being created using traditional breeding techniques: researchers are crossbreeding broccoli with other similar plants that have desirable characteristics, such as resistance to hot summers. Other new crops - varieties of squash or maize, for example - were created using genetic modification technology. Genetically modified crops are very controversial: many consumers believe they are unsafe and so reject them. However, the new broccoli will not be in that category.
Third, vegetables are healthiest to eat right after they are harvested because they retain most of their beneficial nutrients and vitamins. The longer it takes for a vegetable like broccoli to reach consumers, the fewer nutrients and vitamins it contains. Broccoli that is grown locally can be eaten much sooner after it is cut, which will make this new broccoli healthier for East Coast residents than California broccoli.
The professor and author have a discussion about weather cultivating a new kind of B will be beneficial to the society or not. Both of them have proposed three suggestions to support their ideas.
To begin with, the author believes that the new type of B which was planted on the east will lower the price of them by eliminating the transportation fees. However, the professor, casts a doubt on it. In other words, the absent of transportation costs didn't significantly reduce the price of B for the reason that the yield of B was too small to allow the entrepreneur to sell them in a low prices. As a result, consumers eventually didn't save any money.
Secondly, even though the author mentions that the cultivation method of these new types of B is not belong to genetic modification technology, which is almost rejected by consumers, the professor holding the opposing opinions. To be specific, the cultivating company are same as the genetic company. Thus, it is common for consumers to be confusing about weather the new B have the risks as genetic modification fruits.
In the end, the author claims that the short time period of sending B to consumers allows them to enjoy the most healthiest fruits. He suggests that the longer the time take for vegetables to reach consumers, the fewer nutrients and vitamins it contains. But the professor doubts it for the following reasons. He indicates that it is true the amount of vitamins is inversely proportional to the time period, but there are already some well-cultivated fruits like cails which can almost provide the same beneficial contents as B. Thus, it seems unnecessary to spend extra money and energy to develop a new kinds of fruits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rds, the absent of transportation costs didnt significantly reduce the price of B for...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ices. As a result, consumers eventually didnt save any money. Secondly, even though ...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...n method of these new types of B is not belong to genetic modification technology, whi...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'healthiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: healthiest
...B to consumers allows them to enjoy the most healthiest fruits. He suggests that the longer the...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the healthiest'.
Suggestion: most the healthiest
...B to consumers allows them to enjoy the most healthiest fruits. He suggests that the longer the...
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Line 4, column 605, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...extra money and energy to develop a new kinds of fruits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, kind of, as a result, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 291.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85223367698 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87067281149 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 145.348785872 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53264604811 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9121189154 49.2860985944 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06452816374 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0428209658987 0.272083759551 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0159377575622 0.0996497079465 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0153917062512 0.0662205650399 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0257503315191 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00663915702825 0.0443174109184 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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