In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen? Is it positive or negative development
It is becoming more and more frequent, recently, seeing employees and employers to work plenty of hours. Many reasons can be offered to explain this, but it should definitely be seen as a negative trend.
Firstly, the main reason why people spend too much hours at their work is the belief. The majority of workers believe that the dedicated employee is the one who stays at the workplace longer than anyone. For example, in Greece, lawyers, whatever their timetable is, usually work until 8 o' clock in the evening, in order to be presented as good lawyers. Secondly, one crucial reason of this trend is the disproportionality of the work that must be done in comparison with the employees. As society grows, companies require a lot of work to be completed. However, in the same time the latter are not able to hire the percentage of employees that is needed so as to deal with this high amount of work. As a result, people tend to work extra hours to fill the gap.
Undoubtably, this trend has a negative impact on the lifestyle on a huge number of people, especially regarding their health. Since individuals have to spend more time at their work, they do not have time to take care of themselves. Consequently, their work-life figure is unbalanced. According to the Mental Health Foundation, one in six of us will experience a mental health problem caused by the work-related stress, which is occurred by the increased work. A keyway to protect our mental health against the potential detrimental effects of work-related stress is to ensure we have a healthy work-life balance.
In conclusion, it is the belief and the work culture which come about increased working hours; a situation that must be perceived as a negative development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86577181208 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83845014811 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577181208054 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3638404035 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232408617779 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838493815443 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603543627563 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132683627445 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523623348156 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.