although more and more people read the news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. do you agree or disagree?
the relentless development of technology entailed many new types of newspapers, particularly reading online news. however, some people are of the opinion that newspapers still are the most essential source of news. I will give further explanations and express my view in the essay below.
on the one hand, admittedly, printed newspapers play an essential part in terms of updating news because they are censored carefully before printing out. The amount of information is collected and rewrite by professional journalists as well as fully experienced reporters. furthermore, people not only do update news but also read many reviews, comments as well as the attitudes towards questions on professional journalists. However, people might get into some trouble if they want to recommend or reply about the content or qualifications of that newspaper. the reason is that those comments have to be delivered by lorries or trucks to the source and vice versa, readers could not receive their responses immediately.
however, there may be another explanation for this fact and I completely agree with the idea that online news is a better option because of the following reasons. first, what people are exposed to the latest information is an irrefutable benefit. they could easily choose a certain piece of news from many sources of information at the drop of a hat. plus, online news satisfies the changing needs of people in modern times because this type of newspaper integrates visuall with sound effects. such as, readers could not only read the news but also watch videos and postcards about an accident on the street at the same time. secondly, readers could see different viewpoints of another about an affair and express their own opinions about the problem.
in conclusion, I disagree with the idea that newspapers remain the most important source of news because of the mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20261437908 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81322253405 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575163398693 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.3258217135 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280229845085 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094269535054 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875115526669 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206152927458 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749663613187 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.