uestion:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there is no doubt that teachers contribute a lot when it comes to students' life. it is known that students spend almost eight hours at school were share with classmates and professors. Although everyone is free to express their thoughts concerning social and political topics; if a tutor gives students to know their point of view, it could tremendously affect students' point of view. With this in mind, I agree with the statement that teachers should tell students neither their political nor social views.
First of all, some teachers don’t agree with some changes in our society over the years, so they can give views that many students can found an old fashion point of view. For example, I remember when I was at school, my history teacher was giving us her opinion about a few particular topics and someone asked her if she was okay with the LGBT community. she tells us that it was inappropriate. my teacher explained to us that she wasn't in favor of it for people who were homosexuals were sick. After some days, most of the students were looking at her differently.
Secondly, I don't think is appropriate that teachers should talk about their political thoughts since it may affect and change the way students think. everyone has the right to choose their political views but personally, I don't believe that is okay sharing with people where you have a student-teacher relationship. For instance, last year we were having elections in my town and everyone is free to choose which candidate is the best. when my teacher told us that he was supporting one specific candidate and he pointed out their point of view, there was a total change in my class concerning which candidate was supporting.
teachers can indeed inform students about social and political teachers since they are the instructors. However, they should tell students their point of view due to their views could cause some problems. teachers should keep very objectives at the moment to be with students.
In conclusion, since I has some teachers who shared their point of views with my classroom and it didn't go well. I don't believe teachers should shair ther views about society and politics with students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90860215054 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57640220194 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489247311828 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.753094934 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307619289926 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113447910859 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791499193337 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20877192988 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730343023913 0.0645574589148 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.