Dear Sir,
My name is Jenkins and I recently applied for Masters in Commercial Law course at your prestigious School of Excellence in Law college. I can't express my happiness in words when I received your interview letter and I truly felt honoured for considering my application. However, I am afraid that scheduled interview on 10th March 10.30 AM clashes with my earlier appointment with doctor and probably unable to attend interview.
I sincerely apologise for making this excuse, however, my current
position is unavoidable. Earlier this month, while I was going on my bike, I met with an accident causing fracture to my left arm. As a result, I was advised by doctor to take rest and re visit hospital for removing plaster encased to my hand. Therefore, I booked an appointment, unaware of your summons to interview. Understanding how important it is to meet you and finalise my admission, I request you tokindly reschedule my session some time later on same day or any other date.
Perhaps, assuming it is right moment to ask, if you don't mind please share other details of the interview like venue, duration and any tests that I should be aware of. Further, clarify if I need to bring any certificates and Id proof while coming to interview.
Once again, I am really sorry for making this unconventional request and hope you can understand my situation.
Yours Sincerely,
Jenkins
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
... School of Excellence in Law college. I cant express my happiness in words when I re...
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... with my earlier appointment with doctor and probably unable to attend interview....
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... making this excuse, however, my current position is unavoidable. Earlier this m...
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...ise my admission, I request you tokindly reschedule my session some time later on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, therefore, while, as a result, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98728813559 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87477751034 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652542372881 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.880724946 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0833333333 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185196875976 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670463330137 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318203580579 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09574782101 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216604501543 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.