Every heart has an empty space which can only be filled by a friend. Whereas, choosing a friend is never easy. Few suggests that our mate should have same wave length who perpetually agree with us while others argue that it's better to have companion with a different outlook. However, in my opinion, I would like a friend who is good at both appreciating and criticize me if needed. In this essay, in support of my statement, we discuss various scenarios with examples why it's good to have both qualities in a friend.
Corner stone for any relation is loyalty and having same opinions. In case of friendship, confluence of minds with similar taste and interest is reason for embarking new journey. One of the advantage of having a best friend is, together they can find faster solution for problems. Andrea, an expert on Human behaviour, opines that close friend supporting you and taking your side of argument is real confidence booster. Now a days it's common to search their future partner after starting their relation from friendship.
Sociologists suggests that no two human relations are constant. To put it in other words, differences are bound to spurge irrespective of how close two people are. Instead of knuckling it under, it's better to embrace and use it as tool to amend our ways. Similarly, constant ridiculing can also sabotage friendship and hence all disagreements should end with harmonious pact. Therefore, every person should have introspection when criticism comes from his bet buddy. In this way, not only their friendship becomes stronger but also paves way for brightening career. For instance, two of my classmates Eddie and Roshan, who are best pals used to consult each other whenever they have to make important decisions. As a result, they are now successfully running a business and being example for others how to have fruitful friendship.
In a nutshell, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Therefore there is no reason to be steadfast on one principle character of our pal. We all have to agree that we need some one with emotional support who can tap our back and appreciate our success. In a same way, it's also nice to hear few disagreements from our friend which are made in our best interest. Infact, such shades sparkle the relation and strengthens even more.
- You are a university student living in on-campus accommodation. You are having someproblems with the internet connection in your room.Write to the supervisor of your residence. In your letter Introduce yourself Inform him / her of the situation R 78
- In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour while in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want To what extent should children have to follow rules Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples fr 89
- In many countries very few young people read newspapers or follow the newson TV What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ownknowledge or experience 89
- Nowadays the increased amount of garbage is a real concern Why this is happening what can be done to resolve it 89
- You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realized there were some problems with the job.Explain why you took the jobDescribe the problem you experiencedsuggest what could be done about them. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e which can only be filled by a friend. Whereas, choosing a friend is never easy. Few s...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'waved'.
Suggestion: waved
...suggests that our mate should have same wave length who perpetually agree with us wh...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...journey. One of the advantage of having a best friend is, together they can find ...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a best friend is, together they can find faster solution for problems. Andrea, an...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...of argument is real confidence booster. Now a days its common to search their future partn...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...rgument is real confidence booster. Now a days its common to search their future partn...
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Line 5, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ay for brightening career. For instance, two of my classmates Eddie and Roshan, w...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...l, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Therefore there is no reason to be steadfast on o...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: IN_PRINCIPAL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'principal' (=main)?
Suggestion: principal
...ere is no reason to be steadfast on one principle character of our pal. We all have to ag...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... pal. We all have to agree that we need some one with emotional support who can tap our ...
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Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a same way" with adverb for "same"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ap our back and appreciate our success. In a same way, its also nice to hear few disagreement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, as to, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89030612245 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69792208556 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1942670356 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.347826087 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0434782609 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4347826087 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.67935871743 207% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265317508749 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702731332945 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608565043871 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164082360507 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924765152152 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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