Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to your letter asking for the feedback on the course I recently did in your renowned cookery school, The Altius.
My name is Aman, and I am one of your school’s oldest students who did a four-week course with one of your great mentors, Alex. Alex is such a great mentor who knows very well about all the cooking methods and tricks that help you make delicious food. I undergo cake baking training with him as I am interested in cakes and decorating cakes. I enjoyed every class with him and loved all the cake decorating techniques that he taught me. Besides this, I love how he taught me about the different ingredients used in cakes.
It’s been a month since I finished the course, and I still used his baking recipes and tried them over the weekends. Last week, I invited a few guests to my place because I want to celebrate my brother’s birthday. So I baked cake all by myself. I still remember the appreciation I got from all my relatives. They all love the cake and asked me about the ingredients and recipe for making the magic.
All thanks to your cooking school and the great mentor that you have provided me. I am looking forward to doing another course regarding cutlery and Mexican food to surprise my mom as she loves Mexican. So I would suggest you add this course because Mexican food is too much popular these days, and many people love to have Mexican in their cuisine.
I trust that you will give this suggestion your urgent consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Aman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, regarding, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 32.9175257732 173% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 277.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59927797834 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4444298976 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 391.5 290.88556701 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7639748089 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.625 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306765960531 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909207978963 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112971689382 0.0603063233224 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200212011036 0.12726935374 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158096410477 0.0580467560999 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.