Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter:
• Introduce yourself
• Explain that you plan to have a party
• Invite your neighbour to the party
Dear Harry,
I am Brooke, your new neighbour who shifted to your next building a week back. Earlier I stayed in Southend Circle apartments. I am working as Senior Manager in Insurance Company.After 15 years of savings my income I purchased this house. I am a party animal and I never leave a chance to share my happiness with my friends and family. Hence, I planned a party on last Sunday i.e 28th of this month.
As we share common premises it is obvious that some party noise will disturb you. Therefore, I request you kindly excuse me if music and other activities disturb you. I promise to maintain low noise and avoid any circumstance which might jeopardise your peace. Also share my apologies to your family members as well. I take this opportunity to invite you and your wife and children for the above mentioned party. Your presence will not only make me happy but also boost party mood. I have planned some special games for children on that day and I am sure your children also enjoy party thoroughly. Ofcourse I have arranged for drinks and dinner for that day to everyone. Food allergies and priorities will be kept in view for pre arrangement if you mention a day before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Harry, I am Brooke, your new neighbour who shif...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... as Senior Manager in Insurance Company.After 15 years of savings my income I purchas...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... as Senior Manager in Insurance Company.After 15 years of savings my income I purchas...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... last Sunday i.e 28th of this month. As we share common premises it is obvious ...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ance which might jeopardise your peace. Also share my apologies to your family membe...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...angement if you mention a day before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65094339623 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5454702576 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7573287875 44.8134815571 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.4285714286 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29864057589 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094380971588 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699998208233 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215691628406 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351430576672 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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