Recent life is so soffisticated, question is if its important for young indivitual to be organized and able to plan his live?. some persons think having the abillity to plan and organize the life is crucial thing, other concider that thing is not realy concerned. In my opinion, arrage our futur life put a decision is essential for sucsses. In this essay I will ullistrate my view with a coupl of reasons to explain why I think in this way.
First, and formost, planning and organization are benefecial, this is mainly due to the fact that by doing so anable young people especialy student to know what they want to do in futur, particularly whichb type of career they prefer, since, student can choice the correct subjects that corelated to their interest. This is example from my life, when I was in high school, I decided to be a dentist, therfore, I concentrated on materials that help my in this field like biology and anotamy, however, after agratuation from high schoolI enrolled in collage of dentistry in Baghdad university, furthermore, I did a great job in my class, this is due to my previous arrengment and planning, that way I strongly believe, people have to plkan for thier futur
In addition, organization and planning manage our time, to explain this, my son always used to play computer game after come back from his school, I gave him my advise to organize his time and but periorty to the studying then hev can play, but he did not listen, he begins to do his homework in a late time, when he was sleepy and can not focousa with his duty, as a result, his level decline and he got a low score, this example illustrates the importance of organization and planning for our time to get an excelent achievment.
In conclusion, with the incease in the complexity of the life, it is important for young people to organize and plan their life, this is quit beneficial and good way to aviod wasting of valuable time.
Recent life is so soffisticated, question is if its important for young indivitual to be organized and able to plan his live?. some persons think having the abillity to plan and organize the life is crucial thing, other concider that thing is not realy concerned. In my opinion, arrage our futur life put a decision is essential for sucsses. In this essay I will ullistrate my view with a coupl of reasons to explain why I think in this way.
First, and formost, planning and organization are benefecial, this is mainly due to the fact that by doing so anable young people especialy student to know what they want to do in futur, particularly whichb type of career they prefer, since, student can choice the correct subjects that corelated to their interest. This is example from my life, when I was in high school, I decided to be a dentist, therfore, I concentrated on materials that help my in this field like biology and anotamy, however, after agratuation from high schoolI enrolled in collage of dentistry in Baghdad university, furthermore, I did a great job in my class, this is due to my previous arrengment and planning, that way I strongly believe, people have to plkan for thier futur
In addition, organization and planning manage our time, to explain this, my son always used to play computer game after come back from his school, I gave him my advise to organize his time and but periorty to the studying then hev can play, but he did not listen, he begins to do his homework in a late time, when he was sleepy and can not focousa with his duty, as a result, his level decline and he got a low score, this example illustrates the importance of organization and planning for our time to get an excelent achievment.
In conclusion, with the incease in the complexity of the life, it is important for young people to organize and plan their life, this is quit beneficial and good way to aviod wasting of valuable time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62209302326 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67537899844 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549418604651 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.1344086022 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 295.27849186 48.9658058833 603% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.142857143 100.406767564 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.1428571429 20.6045352989 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8571428571 5.45110844103 291% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384215907841 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250115931474 0.076458572812 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.233039265739 0.0737576698707 316% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27036350767 0.150856017488 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.213368198429 0.0645574589148 331% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 11.7677419355 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 10.1575268817 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.0537634409 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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