Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some major to cause the extinction of some species of plants and animals, while other people hold the view that there are other fundamental ecosystem obstacles. In this essay I will shed some light on this argument from both sides and give my opinion before arriving at conclusion.
To begin with, many people are believed that losing some species in terms of herbal or animal can pose detrimental effects on the earth ecosystem. Scientists have discovered in recent years that the existence of every creature can directly affect on the chain of other creatures life. When one kind of creature is vanished, this matter can be tangible on the lack of other hunting animal‘s food. Take rarity of weaker animals that put many kinds of Tigers in the verge of extinction, as an example. There fore, many environmentalists are worry about the plant and animal’s food chain which are related Tochter massively.
On the other hand, lots of people are said that there are many substantial issues about environment which should be put on the priority. One major problem is air pollution which is rampant issue and has been imposing many disasters. Not only is air pollution concerning subject in related human’s life, but also can directly affect on life of plants and animals in many ways. A good illustration is the increasing number of the global temperature and in following of this matter we will be encounter of many irreparable issues. Increasing global temperature can cause melting the pole glaciers, the level of the seas and oceans will increase and it can cause floods and severe storms which put human and other creature‘s life in danger.
In conclusion, with considering above discussions of both groups, there are logical reasons for concerning about mentioning notions. I personally believe that on the earth every matters are completely related to each other. So, it should be considered that harming environment in every aspect can be result to commence of new disaster.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04863221884 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70746802872 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553191489362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1288326043 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145614287484 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512870536483 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461275333423 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.09737507036 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596512188426 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.