Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about whether prosperous sports athletes make more money than other people who are extremely successed in other type of skills. I personally believe that it is not fair.
Some people find it acceptable that people who play sport earn higher salaries than others. They have several reasons for this opinion. Firstly, athletes need to initiate practicing from earlier childhood in order to becoming successful. For example a gymnast always start this major when they are four to five years-old. Furthermore, sport is potentially higher risk and people might hurt themselves dramatically, for instance if a soccer player brake his/her leg during the game, he/she will not be able to play anymore and it means the end of professional life. Moreover it should be considered that the number of athletes who become famous and achieve a lot of money in comparison of the usual and unfamed sport players, is extremely rare.
Nevertheles another group complain that high-experienced people who work in other fields, are not well-paid as they deserve it. For example people who decide to become a university professor have to study for years and during this period they sometimes even would not be able to make the ends meet. In addition I believe that other professional persons who work in a vast variety of carrers from cooking to science research, are far more useful for human-being than athletes. Although they never remunerate equally. For example researchers are paid low salaries.
In conclusion, with respect to professional athletes and their accomplishments, I believe that other high-skilled people should be paid more money.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23684210526 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81295720714 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582706766917 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.263440841 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210675630263 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733544125654 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789664174367 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156248789381 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055394940444 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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