Parents also should be punished or not for bad behaviour for children What is your opinion

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Parents also should be punished or not for bad behaviour for children. What is your opinion?

As far we know , children's behaviour always reflects what they have been taught from their family members , their surroundings etc . Usually there have a common believe that ,because of any bad behaviour of children ,they should be punished ,which is also right to the some instinct . But along with the children's ,there have some kind of thought that their parents should be punished and from my opinion ,which is not write . I am totally disagree with this thought.
First of all ,childhood is a range of age limit from 9 year to 12 year , where a child gather proper knowledge from his/her family . Secondly ,besides the parents there have some other sorts of circumstances ,which always play a vital role ,for build up their appropriate values like other childs behiavour from his/her playground ,close relatives of them .Now a days social media gives a direct and major effect on thier behaviour and their social values .At present time ,before go to school children's start to involve video games ,watching tv dramas on social media . In this age period ,more of them have no approprite knowledge for differentiating right and wrong ,for this reason ,they easily get involved in doing misbehave to others .For which reason ,giving punishment is also necessary which also should be through in practical way not physical . Last of all , we can say that ,for a child misbehaviour ,parents are not only responsible ,there have also other catalysts which give a tremendous effect on child behaviour always . We should be always be alarmed about other factors as well as behaivour of parents towards them .
There have also a opposite thought , which supports to provide punishment to parents also because of childrens immoral acts . Ofcourse appropriate of counseilling to the parents is very important by understanding the proper issuse ,how they can provide a better education ,a proper lesson that the child never do the same mistake again . By giving no physical punishment ,how the parents can improve childrens moral values towads the society .
To recaputulate this all things I am totally disagree to provide punishment the parents for a child's bad behaviour . By improving the bonding in between parents and childs ,there will be creat a better environment from where child get teach a good and proper leasons about moralities , well behave and manners towards the other .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1976.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64309172142 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520512820513 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.9001858249 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 67.0 5.01903807615 1335% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363694022401 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136351362874 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936990586173 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219638820516 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456593432308 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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