In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that some workers around the world earn big amount of wages. Therefore, it is argued that it is beneficial for the evolvement of a nation, whilst other disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications and the government should set a certain level of salary for each employee. In my view, the positive effect of high wages could certainly greater than its disadvantages.
On the one hand, there are clear arguments that extremely high salaries for some workers have good impact on a country. To begin with, one of the main reasons is that the economy of a nation is indirectly depends on workers of the country. In other words, when companies provide a high or big amount of money in terms of salaries to their employers that they spend that money on several things and the government profit it from different sectors like tourism, public transport and so on. Moreover, some workers who perform risky jobs such as mining deserve high salaries because they endanger their own lives. Thus, accounting extremely high wages to some workers are good for both country and receiver.
On the other hand, many people disagree and feel that giving a big amount of salaries to workers have some negative effect. To begin with, if organizations provide such a huge amount of money to some of their employees, then others would think it would be unfair to them and they will also demand to increase their salary. Furthermore, it can also hinder the distribution of salary to others because giving higher wages increase the financial burden on small scale businesses. That is why, the government should limit a specific amount of money for every worker.
To conclude, I believe that although high salaries can create some tension to small companies, some risk taker workers deserve an extremely big amount of wages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in terms of salaries to their employers that they spend that money on several th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, such as, in my view, in other words, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88064516129 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52537795566 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512903225806 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.652483547 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.384615385 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364105439015 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130403631605 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713660618774 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215902227141 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180195494597 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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