Peoples today are interested with getting a huge amount of information,to learn acrucial skills to obtain a perfect live, some people believe reading book is a good method to gain information, other believe watching electric device is better to getting information. I think, watching electrical devices in a perfect way to get a lot of information. In this essay I will explain why I believe that with acouple reasons.
To begin with, electric devices give us wide spread of information more than books did, for example, before many years, when I was in high school, my teacher ask us to do a project about a space, in these prevouse day we have only book of the library that can use them as referances for our work, therefore it is difficaly to complet our project with a wide and convint information, right now, when my son need to do project or assentment he can use googele to collect a lot of information about any subject.
In addition, the eleccric information is more updated than that got it from book, because, more evidence and kwolege updated every day,while the book need a lot of time to written then sell. moreover, the information from electric devices a valaible 24 hours in 7 day for free, we do not need to pay money to get it, unlike, books, some time we need to buy them to study or do any homework, for this reason books are more expensive than the information that may obtain from devises that depend on inte
Peoples today are interested with getting a huge amount of information,to learn acrucial skills to obtain a perfect live, some people believe reading book is a good method to gain information, other believe watching electric device is better to getting information. I think, watching electrical devices in a perfect way to get a lot of information. In this essay I will explain why I believe that with acouple reasons.
To begin with, electric devices give us wide spread of information more than books did, for example, before many years, when I was in high school, my teacher ask us to do a project about a space, in these prevouse day we have only book of the library that can use them as referances for our work, therefore it is difficaly to complet our project with a wide and convint information, right now, when my son need to do project or assentment he can use googele to collect a lot of information about any subject.
In addition, the eleccric information is more updated than that got it from book, because, more evidence and kwolege updated every day,while the book need a lot of time to written then sell. moreover, the information from electric devices a valaible 24 hours in 7 day for free, we do not need to pay money to get it, unlike, books, some time we need to buy them to study or do any homework, for this reason books are more expensive than the information that may obtain from devises that depend on inte
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...ith getting a huge amount of information,to learn acrucial skills to obtain a perfe...
^^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n. I think, watching electrical devices in a perfect way to get a lot of information. In this es...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'booked'.
Suggestion: booked
...ace, in these prevouse day we have only book of the library that can use them as ref...
^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...e evidence and kwolege updated every day,while the book need a lot of time to written ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...eed a lot of time to written then sell. moreover, the information from electric devices ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6015625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64435526095 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.449731422 48.9658058833 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.333333333 100.406767564 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 20.6045352989 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8333333333 5.45110844103 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407841348703 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21272403025 0.076458572812 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.22248002113 0.0737576698707 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277144979762 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237873069342 0.0645574589148 368% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , to
...ith getting a huge amount of information,to learn acrucial skills to obtain a perfe...
^^^
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a perfect way" with adverb for "perfect"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...n. I think, watching electrical devices in a perfect way to get a lot of information. In this es...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'booked'.
Suggestion: booked
...ace, in these prevouse day we have only book of the library that can use them as ref...
^^^^
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...e evidence and kwolege updated every day,while the book need a lot of time to written ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
...eed a lot of time to written then sell. moreover, the information from electric devices ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1977.66487455 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 256.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6015625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64435526095 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5703125 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.1344086022 209% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.449731422 48.9658058833 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.333333333 100.406767564 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.6666666667 20.6045352989 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.8333333333 5.45110844103 290% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407841348703 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21272403025 0.076458572812 278% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.22248002113 0.0737576698707 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277144979762 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237873069342 0.0645574589148 368% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 11.7677419355 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.0537634409 187% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.247311828 185% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.