some cities have few controls on the design and construction of housing and office building. People think that they are free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
Some cities have intervened in the design and construction of the infrastructure while citizens think that they have the freedom of choice in the style of their houses and buildings. While this development may bring about some benefits, from my point of view, they are eclipsed by the drawbacks.
On the one hand, this phenomenon offers people several benefits. Without control, citizens can create many new styles of housing. Owners can use their creativity and knowledge to create many modern and unique houses which make the city become more appealing and look attractive to tourists. Besides, they can apply new technologies in house construction and turning it into “smart houses”. This will help the city become more developed by modernizing its infrastructure with more advanced equipment. As a result, buildings which are made of various designs can make the area more outstanding and in accordance with many people from different cultures.
On the other hand, in my respectives, the aforementioned advantages are at the expand of greater drawbacks. In some cases, if people have their designs, it will lead to the lack of uniformity of the city. This makes not only the appearance of the area become disorder but also makes the city unappealing with tourists and who are seeking a settling place. Moreover, this mingles with lay-out can demonstrate the manner of the city. Take Hoi An’s architecture as an example. Hoi An is a popular tourist destination because of its ancient architecture with houses of hundreds of years with similar color shapes. If the house owners in this area change the pattern, they will destroy the historical features of the land that represent culture. In addition, the accommodation also needs to follow certain standards in order not to damage surrounding architectures.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of designing a house freely are more considerable than its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22044728435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95823528103 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2190567133 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1176470588 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230199557199 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682865294274 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080587077812 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154101033037 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786677423518 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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