You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, it is obvious that more and more people would like to buy things online due to numerous advantages. I am sure that this kind of shopping will keep flourishing in the future because of huge advantages despite a small number of disadvantages.
On the one hand, shopping still remain mysterious to some people, especially the elderly who often find it hard to accomplish the process to purchase for the products online. Moreover, sometimes, people are worried about shipping fees, which is high especially for products which is delivered from foreign countries.
However, the disadvantages can never outnumber the advantages. One of the main factors that encourage people to shop online is the convenience. Thanks to online markets, people now can get access to a huge number of products in the world easily without having to go from shops to shops to find out an item that they like, which is considered to be exhausting and time-consuming. Additionally, shopping online means that people can buy a product with lower price than it is sold in offline shops. It is simply because the middle man is cut out, which results in the price decreased a little bit. Nevertheless, online markets usually provide customers with many vouchers on speacial ocassions of the year and these vouchers are often used for not only free shipping but also valuable gifts from the brands.
Overall, despite some disadvantages, shopping online is predicted to keep taking off in the future due to its convenience and other competitive edges against traditional ways of shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ture because of huge advantages despite a small number of disadvantages. On the one hand, shop...
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Line 5, column 272, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'shops to'.
Suggestion: shops to
... world easily without having to go from shops to shops to find out an item that they like, which ...
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Line 5, column 584, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... which results in the price decreased a little bit. Nevertheless, online markets usually p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12062256809 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84050423727 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599221789883 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.170096878 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.636363636 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108316890508 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429413818334 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403770116535 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072958652403 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580602392976 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.