Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Helping people having lower condition than ourselves has always been constituted as the warm-hearted action and different people has their own manner in helping others. There's a opinion that giving the richness for a person is the opportunity to assist other people. In my perspective, this statement should be carefully examined.
To start with, being rich or wealthy means that you have a better financial situations and maybe achieve more success in their life. In the other words, people having a stable money background and can afford those superior items such as a 1000 US Dollars dress or a dinner in a 5 stars restaurant are considered as rich people. As the concrete and stable money flow, the way they help the poverty might be in the different level. For instance, they could reconstruct a house that is seriously damaged because of the storm for a particular person or support the children's tuition fee from their primary school to high school. Jeasuk Yoo, a Korean comedian famous for his loving characteristics, is a standout example because he annually donates around 1 billion won for the Korean Women Association so that this organization could buy sanitary pads for girls or women who can’t afford those during their period.
On the other hand, helping others is not the matter of being rich or not, this depends on the human relationships. If you are a college student being depending on parent’s support, you can help the people who are poor or in difficult circumstances by giving old but still in-use cloths or participating in the volunteer activities such as preparing and handing meals to the homeless, et cetera. During last October in the Central cities of Vietnam, for example, the huge flood totally changed local people’s daily life as the flood almost drown the whole. Many people, regardless of their age, life condition, gave their hand to help those people overcome the disease.
To recapitulate, giving help is a choice of an individual, not an optional. Eveyone have their different way to assist others. If you are rich, you give the big help and if you just have a little better condition than people whom need help, small help from you is also appreciated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, for example, for instance, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94878706199 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69222452356 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574123989218 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0706562554 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7333333333 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270429838693 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917000974142 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063123577097 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18377503991 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400368723457 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.